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最近和一位跟自己的背景有点雷同的朋友聊天。这位朋友大学毕业于宾州大学华顿商学院之后到了Yale 和 Columbia U念硕士。我们的母语都是中文,只是接触到「学术界」的东西都是以英语作 first exposure,成长过程中对英文很有兴趣,也很blessed地受到了西方很严格的写作和英语训练。 另外个共通点,也就是这篇想要阐述的。我在职场、他在私下生活,都帮不少国内的学生或朋友改过找工作的「自传」或是申请国外大学、研究所的 college admissions essays/ statement of purpose。过程中我们谈到非常多的「共同点」(or 共同问题),是我们在批改过程中的共通心得。统整在下面给大家参考。我认为将这个阐述「why」(不管用英文还中文)的能力俱备好,这项能力可以延伸到介绍产品、project、做专业presentation等等场合,很值得训练。 代写essay机构 组织面向 问题 [1]: 一段和一段间没有承接 (no transition) 分析:也就是说,一段一段都在讲自己觉得有相关,其实「独立不相干」的事情。会有这样的问题,常常因为是笔者没有认真思考组织,就照着「时间」(chronological order) 来,或是网路上所教的(动机---教育背景---工作经验---以后想学的东西---结论) 制式structure。结果写出来的东西像极了五大块独立的文章被拼凑在一起。 内容面向 问题 [2]: 没有「细节」,没有证据,只有「I believe」「I am sure」「I am confident that」等无法说服人的一厢情愿 分析: 这个问题其实写很多人写的中文会议记录或中文作文即可看出。中文这个语言有很多很vague的字汇(其、之、相关),不管是记录的人懒惰不想想清楚细节、还是没记清楚,导致中文似乎变成了一个,常常只有一堆「好学生的空话」,很少「细节与交待过程」的语言(但其实并不是啊)。 这样的现象,影响到了很多人的英文写作。很多人叙述研究,从「叙述指导教授」、「研究主旨」、就直接跳到「遇到不少困难」但「想到某人的一句话所以不怕困难」最后更神奇的就「我学了很多有关作实验需要的相关技能」然后就「发表在期刊上」。 「因此我相信我会是个学很快不怕困难且称职的研究者」。 你买单? Where are the details? (细节在哪?) Where is the evidence? (证据在哪?) Process, process, process. (过程很重要啊!) 遇到了很多困难,像是怎样的困难?解决了很多困难,如何解决的?毅力、合作、小组讨论,不是排除困难的直接solutions。你如何分析问题?如何找到问题的核心,才是 the skills you want to demonstrate) 问题 [3]: 有什么就写什么,内容大杂烩,没有「核心概念」 分析:任何一个会行销的品牌,都会有一个鲜明的形象。这个形象,可以用故事包装(e.g. 为台湾而教),也可能用一个「颜色」(e.g., Tiffany)、一个「风格」(Uniqlo)、一个「核心价值」 来给消费者留下印象。一篇好的statement of purpose, 或是叙述「动机」的一般文章,也需要给读者「一个」(是,一个刚刚好)形象,让他牢牢记得你这个人。不可以什么都讲,讲到最后没有一个是重点,变成了一个 "hotchpotch" (大杂烩)。 问题 [4]: 亚洲人常有的现象,深怕别人不知道自己好,所以条列了一堆「事迹」和丰功伟业 分析:最直接的负面影响就是,「关公面前耍大刀」。其实只要诚实。 实地讲出一个故事,阐述出自己的能力,对方都会被说服。如果一味地堆积CV里已经有的丰功伟业,而这些丰功伟业并没有办法support你要说的故事 or 主旨,那么恐怕效果是事倍功半的。 (即便这个丰功伟业是得诺贝尔奖、或是得奥运金牌,我们都必须去叙述背后的故事和过程,更何况通常我们叙述的可能只是GPA 4.0, 有麦肯锡顾问公司的工作经验、毕业于台大电机系这种可能也不见得代表什么的事迹。 还是回到问题[2],show your evidence. 问题 [5]: “不断”地用空虚没情感的话夸奖对方的组织/企业 分析: 有时我们真的不用浪费唇舌夸赞Harvard 有很好的academic programs 或是 Google 是现在未来前景无穷的企业。他们都蛮自恋的。 问题 [6]: SOP/essay 不是流水长板的履历/CV 所以大家在交出一篇文章之前,先看看自己有没有犯下上面所列的错误吧! 要写出一篇好文章,或做一个好的presentation不容易,但真的worth fighting for! ) 论文服务-【essay代写】【assignment代写】全球在线写作中心...
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澳大利亚凯恩斯Essay代写:选择媒体

20世纪40年代,随着学者们开始研究为什么人们选择消费各种形式的媒体,使用和满足是最初引入的。在接下来的几十年里,使用和满足的研究主要集中在媒体用户所寻求的满足感上。然后,在20世纪70年代,研究人员将注意力转向媒体使用的结果以及媒体所满足的社会和心理需求。今天,这个理论通常归功于Jay Blumler和Elihu Katz在1974年所做的工作。随着媒体技术的不断增加,对使用和满足理论的研究对于理解人们选择媒体的动机以及他们从中获得的满足感比以往任何时候都更加重要。 。使用和满足理论依赖于关于媒体用户的两个原则。首先,它将媒体用户定性为他们选择所使用的媒体时的活跃用户。从这个角度来看,人们不会被动地使用媒体。他们在媒体选择中投入并积极参与。其次,人们意识到他们选择不同媒体选择的原因。他们依靠自己的动机知识做出媒体选择,帮助他们满足自己的特定需求。 澳大利亚凯恩斯Essay代写:选择媒体 In the 1940s, as scholars began to study why people chose to consume various forms of media, use and satisfaction were first introduced. In the next few decades, research on usage and satisfaction focused on the satisfaction that media users seek. Then, in the 1970s, researchers turned their attention to the results of media use and the social and psychological needs of the media. Today, this theory is usually attributed to the work done by Jay Blumler and Elihu Katz in 1974. As media technology continues to grow, research on the use and satisfaction of theories is more important than ever to understand the motivations people choose to use and the satisfaction they receive from them. . The use and satisfaction theory relies on two principles regarding media users. First, it characterizes media users as active users when they choose the media they use. From this perspective, people do not use the media passively. They invest and...
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加拿大温哥华地质学Assignment代写:屏障岛

位于格鲁吉亚与田纳西州北部边界的奥格尔索普堡附近的Chickamauga和Chattanooga国家军事公园向Chickamauga市致敬,Chickamauga是内战期间南部邦联脱离的重要地点。这座拥有2,500人口的城镇位于田纳西河畔,在那里穿过阿巴拉契亚山脉,这是丘陵乡村的一个空间,允许四条主要铁路汇合。在1863年9月18日至20日的三天时间里,联盟将军William Rosecrans和邦联将军Braxton Bragg在Chickamauga战役中相遇,并于11月再次参加了查塔努加战役。 1864年,联盟占领了城市并为谢尔曼3月在格鲁吉亚建立了供应和通讯基地。坎伯兰岛国家海岸位于佐治亚州东南部,位于佐治亚州最大和最南端的屏障岛上,在那里盐沼,活橡树的海洋森林和金色的海滩和沙丘拥有多样化的栖息地。坎伯兰岛盐沼位于岛屿的背风处,中间是海洋森林,海滩和沙丘位于海边。海洋森林以活橡树为主,其树枝上覆盖着西班牙苔藓,复活蕨类植物和各种形式的真菌。盐沼包括雪松树,棕榈树和棕榈树。岛上很少有动物,尽管海洋动物在潮汐时参观,生物发光的浮游生物在夜间发光。 加拿大温哥华地质学Assignment代写:屏障岛 The Chickamauga and Chattanooga National Military Parks near Oglethorpe Fort on the northern border of Georgia and Tennessee pay tribute to the city of Chickamauga, an important location for the breakup of the Confederacy during the Civil War. The town of 2,500 people is located on the banks of the Tennessee River, passing through the Appalachian Mountains, a space in the hilly countryside that allows for the convergence of four major railways. During the three days from September 18 to 20, 1863, Alliance General William Rosecrans and Confederate General Braxton Bragg met in the Battle of Chickamauga and again participated in the Battle of Chattanooga in November. In 1864, the Alliance occupied the city and established a supply and communications base for Sherman in Georgia in March. The Cumberland National Seashore is located in southeastern Georgia, on Georgia's largest and southernmost barrier island, where salt marshes, live oak forests and golden beaches and sand dunes have diverse...
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英国University of Essex Essaya代写:道德性

在很多情况下,人类似乎使自己相信自己被拒绝采取某种行动,而在同伴看来,他们实际上并未这样做。 在这些情况中,很大一部分可能涉及称为自欺欺人的现象。 兰斯·阿姆斯特朗(Lance Armstrong)可能只是提供了我们可以提供的最自欺欺人的案例之一。 然而,谁能说你在欺骗自己呢? 通过判断谎言的道德性,我们可能使自己陷入了最困难的怀疑之地之一。 英国University of Essex Essaya代写:道德性 In many cases, humans seem to convince themselves that they have been refused some action, and from the point of view of their peers, they have not actually done so. A large proportion of these situations may involve what is known as self-deception. Lance Armstrong may just provide one of the most self-deceiving cases we can offer. However, who can say that you are deceiving yourself? By judging the morality of lies, we may put ourselves in one of the most difficult places of doubt....
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英国兰卡斯特大学统计Essay代写:人口统计数据

仅当您正在设计特定于该个体的某些东西(例如假肢)时,拥有单个个体的人体测量数据才有用。 真正的力量来自拥有一个人口统计数据集,这基本上是对很多人的度量。 如果您拥有上述人口中具有统计意义的重要部分的数据,则可以推断出您没有的数据。 因此,通过统计数据,您可以测量人口数据集中的几个人,并且具有足够的知识来高度准确地确定其他人的状况。 此过程类似于民意测验人员用来确定可能的选举结果的方法。 人口可以像“男人”一样笼统,代表世界上所有种族和国家的所有男性,也可以针对诸如“高加索美洲男人”这样的人口稠密的人群量身定制。 英国兰卡斯特大学统计Essay代写:人口统计数据 Having anthropometric data for a single individual is only useful if you are designing something that is specific to that individual, such as a prosthetic limb. The real power comes from having a demographic data set, which is basically a measure for many people. If you have data for a statistically significant portion of the above population, you can infer data that you do not have. So with statistics, you can measure several people in a demographic dataset and have enough knowledge to determine the status of others with high accuracy. This process is similar to the method used by pollsters to determine possible election results. The population can be as general as "men", representing all men in all races and countries in the world, or it can be tailored for densely populated people such as "Caucasian American men"....
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澳大利亚迪肯大学Assignment代写: 银行法

虽然沃伦是一名注册的共和党人,直到20世纪90年代,她才在这十年间转向民主党。然而,直到2011年,她才开始认真地开始了自己的政治生涯。那一年,她宣布参选2012年马萨诸塞州参议院选举,竞选民主党,以取代共和党现任总统斯科特·布朗。她的爆发时刻伴随着2011年9月的一次演讲,其中有一种病毒式传播,她反对这样一种想法,即对富人征税是阶级斗争。在她的回答中,她认为没有人依靠社会其他人,从工人到基础设施再到教育等等,没有人变得富裕,文明社会的社会契约意味着那些从制度中受益的人再次投资于此。帮助下一个想要做同样事情的人。沃伦以近54%的选票赢得大选,很快成为民主党的明星。鉴于她在经济学方面的丰富经验,她的委员会任务是参议院银行委员会。不久,她因对大银行高管和监管机构的无情质疑而获得了声誉。参议员伊丽莎白沃伦还提出了一项法案,允许学生以与银行相同的速度向政府借款。 2015年,她与共和党和独立参议员共同发起了立法,该立法建立在1933年的“银行法”之上,旨在减少未来金融危机的可能性。 澳大利亚迪肯大学Assignment代写: 银行法 Although Warren was a registered Republican, it was not until the 1990s that she turned to the Democratic Party in the past decade. However, it was not until 2011 that she began to seriously begin her political career. That year, she announced her candidacy for the 2012 Massachusetts Senate election, campaigning for the Democratic Party to replace the current Republican President Scott Brown. Her eruption was accompanied by a speech in September 2011, in which there was a viral spread, and she opposed the idea that taxing the rich was a class struggle. In her answer, she believes that no one depends on the rest of society, from workers to infrastructure to education, etc. No one becomes rich. The social contract of civilized society means that those who benefit from the system reinvest in this. . Help the next person who wants to do the same thing. Warren won the election with nearly 54% of the votes and...
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英国杜伦大学Research Method 代写:研究人员

除了达成共识外,李克特量表还可用于要求广泛的态度。 除上述示例外,李克特项目还可以询问某人做某事的频率(频率项的端点“非常频繁”和“从不”),某人认为某件事对他们有多重要(端点对于重要性的重要性) 项目是“非常重要”和“不是很重要”),以及人们喜欢某事物的程度(喜欢的项目的端点是“很多”和“一点也不”)。 利克特量表通过在每个项目的响应中包括几个类别供您选择,从而使研究人员能够收集可提供细微差别和对参与者意见的见解的数据。 而且,此数据是定量的,因此很容易进行统计分析。 英国杜伦大学Research Method 代写:研究人员 In addition to reaching consensus, Likert scales can also be used to require a broad range of attitudes. In addition to the example above, the Likert project can also ask how often someone does something (the endpoints of the frequency term are "very frequent" and "never"), how much someone thinks something is important to them (the endpoint is important Sexual importance) The item is "very important" and "not very important"), and the degree to which people like something (the endpoints of favorite items are "many" and "not at all"). Likert scales allow you to select data by including several categories in each item's response, enabling researchers to collect data that provides nuances and insights into participant opinions. Moreover, this data is quantitative, making it easy to perform statistical analysis....
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新西兰奥塔哥大学代写:白噪声

科学将白噪声定义为所有可听声音频率的组合。研究表明,听力正常的人可以听到20到20,000赫兹的声音频率。换句话说,可以认为白噪声就像是一次播放大约20,000种不同音调的声音。白噪声的实际声音通常被描述为嘶嘶声,类似于单词“hush”中字母“sh”的声音。选择形容词“white”来描述这种声音的最终组合,因为白色的相似性噪声对白光的质量,科学描述了可见光谱的所有颜色的组合。作为所有可听频率的组合,可以使用白噪声掩盖其他可能分散注意力的声音。例如,打开风扇可能会帮助淹没隔壁邻居吵闹的声音。从这个意义上说,风扇的嗡嗡声类似于白噪声。但白噪声如何掩盖其他噪音? 新西兰奥塔哥大学代写:白噪声 Science defines white noise as a combination of all audible sound frequencies. Studies have shown that people with normal hearing can hear sound frequencies of 20 to 20,000 Hz. In other words, white noise can be thought of as playing about 20,000 different tones at a time. The actual sound of white noise is usually described as a beep, similar to the sound of the letter "sh" in the word "hush". The adjective "white" is chosen to describe the final combination of such sounds, because white similarity noise versus white light quality scientifically describes the combination of all colors of the visible spectrum. As a combination of all audible frequencies, white noise can be used to mask other sounds that may be distracting. For example, turning on the fan might help drown the loud noise of the neighbor next door. In this sense, the fan's hum is similar to white noise. But how does white noise mask other noise?...
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新加坡国立大学Medical Essay代写:神经损伤

任何一种神经毒剂都可能是最致命的化学物质。 Sarin,VX和相关化合物比大多数其他化合物致命得多。 例如,沙林的毒性是氰化氢的约500倍。 不需要吸入神经气体才有效。 它可以通过皮肤吸收。 虽然可以以极低的剂量存活,但受害者通常会遭受某种程度的永久性神经损伤。 VX甚至可能更强大,尽管在战斗中从未使用过神经毒剂,因此其上的数据较少。 VX会抑制神经系统中的一种酶,从而不断激发信号。 失去对身体功能的控制,窒息和抽搐会导致死亡。 新加坡国立大学Medical Essay代写:神经损伤 Any nerve agent is probably the deadliest chemical. Sarin, VX and related compounds are far more deadly than most other compounds. For example, sarin is about 500 times more toxic than hydrogen cyanide. No need to inhale nerve gas to be effective. It can be absorbed through the skin. Although it is possible to survive at very low doses, victims often suffer some degree of permanent nerve damage. VX may even be more powerful, although nerve agents have never been used in combat, so there is less data on it. VX inhibits an enzyme in the nervous system, which constantly triggers signals. Loss of control over body functions, suffocation and convulsions can lead to death....
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澳大利亚世界文学Essay代写:日本作家

日本作家村上春树(Haruki Murakami)是一名佛教神父的儿子,他于1982年与《荒野大通》(A Wild Sheep Chase)首次引起轰动,这部小说充满了魔幻现实主义的风格,他将在接下来的几十年中创作自己的小说。 村上的作品令人忧郁,有时是奇妙的,而且通常是第一人称的。 他曾说过:“他的早期著作……起源于个人的黑暗,而后来的作品则挖掘了社会和历史中发现的黑暗。” 他在西方人中最受欢迎的书是《发条小鸟编年史》,2005年的英文版《岸上的卡夫卡》在西方也取得了巨大的成功。 村上广受欢迎的小说《 1Q84》的英文版于2011年发行。 澳大利亚世界文学Essay代写:日本作家 Haruki Murakami, a Japanese writer, is the son of a Buddhist priest. He made a sensation with A Wild Sheep Chase for the first time in 1982. The novel is full of magic realism. Create his own novel for the next few decades. Murakami's work is melancholic, sometimes wonderful, and usually first-person. He once said: "His early works ... originated from personal darkness, and later works dig out the darkness found in society and history." His most popular book among Westerners is "The Clockwork Bird The Chronicles, and the English version of Kafka Ashore in 2005 also achieved great success in the West. The English version of Murakami's popular novel "1Q84" was released in 2011....
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